入門ビジネス英語 2018/7/10 #入門ビジネス英語
10 火 Lesson28 改善点を指摘する
Yes, let’s learn how to communicate effectively in business.
Hello, and welcome to our program. We’re so glad you turned in.

Okay. Let’s listen to today’s business scene.

Roberto, your post is persuasive but I find it a bit dry. In a blog, it’s most important to have a personal touch.

Personal touch? You mean talking about myself?

Well, if you could add some behind-the-scene stories, that would make a difference.

I see. I’ll do that.

Great! Fatima, you wrote about concerns from a customers’ perspective, which is good. Try to add some more positive language though.

It would look more attractive.

All right. I’ll try to turn the negatives into positives.


post ブログの投稿
persuasive 説得力がある
dry あっさりしている、淡白な、つまらない、ユーモアがなくて真面目すぎる
*人間に対して dry とか wet は使わないので注意してください
personal touch 親しみやすさ、温かみ
behind-the-scene 舞台裏の
make a difference 違いが出る
concern 懸念
perspective 視点
Though という最後につける言い方ですが、
文頭にbutを持ってきて  But try to add…というよりは柔らかくなります
negative, positive 名詞
Turn A into B , AをBに変える

-Business phrase of the day
If you could add some behind-the-scene stories, that would make a difference.

Having nutritious meals makes a difference to your health.
nutritious 栄養のある

-Similar expressions
If you could disclose some inside stories, that would have an impact.
disclose 明らかにする、秘密などを公表する

-Upgrade your communication skills
Personal touch 親しみやすさ、温かみ
I love this restaurant because it provides service with a personal touch.

perspective
Why don’t we look at this particular matter from the shareholders’ perspective.
perspective= viewpoint ものの見方、視点

-Tips for business communication
constructive criticism 建設的な批判

The only room for improvement I can think of is –
唯一の改善の余地はー

I think there are some areas that need improvement

We’re so glad that you tuned in to our program today.
See you next time.
Bye.




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