入門ビジネス英語 2018/7/10 #入門ビジネス英語
10 火 Lesson28 改善点を指摘する
Yes, let’s learn how to communicate effectively in business.
Hello, and welcome to our program. We’re so glad you turned in.
Okay. Let’s listen to today’s business scene.
Roberto, your post is persuasive but I find it a bit dry. In a blog, it’s most important to have a personal touch.
Personal touch? You mean talking about myself?
Well, if you could add some behind-the-scene stories, that would make a difference.
I see. I’ll do that.
Great! Fatima, you wrote about concerns from a customers’ perspective, which is good. Try to add some more positive language though.
It would look more attractive.
All right. I’ll try to turn the negatives into positives.
*人間に対して dry とか wet は使わないので注意してください
personal touch 親しみやすさ、温かみ
make a difference 違いが出る
文頭にbutを持ってきて But try to add…というよりは柔らかくなります
negative, positive 名詞
Turn A into B , AをBに変える
-Business phrase of the day
If you could add some behind-the-scene stories, that would make a difference.
Having nutritious meals makes a difference to your health.
If you could disclose some inside stories, that would have an impact.
-Upgrade your communication skills
Personal touch 親しみやすさ、温かみ
I love this restaurant because it provides service with a personal touch.
Why don’t we look at this particular matter from the shareholders’ perspective.
perspective= viewpoint ものの見方、視点
-Tips for business communication
constructive criticism 建設的な批判
The only room for improvement I can think of is –
I think there are some areas that need improvement
We’re so glad that you tuned in to our program today.
See you next time.