ラジオビジネス英語 2021/7/22 Interview 4 Parts7





ラジオビジネス英語 2021/7/21 L48 ミーティング後のやりとり
Lesson 英文メール
And I’m Jenny Silver.
Welcome to Business English for Global Competence.
Yes. Let’s learn how to communicate effectively in business.

Let’s learn how to write emails in English together.
So, let’s get started.
Okay! Let’s take a look at Takashi’s email.

Subject: Thank you
Hi Lucy,
Thank you for taking the time yesterday. It was very nice talking to you. It was interesting to know your background and to exchange our views on local business customs.
Since I’m new to the Southeast Asian markets, it would be great if you could give me an essential reading list regarding local business customs (books, articles, papers, etc.). That will greatly help me in my preparation for my new assignment.
Regards,
Takashi

Points to Check 改善点
1). Subject: Thank you
件名は適切か
2). Thank you for taking the time yesterday. It was very nice talking to you. It was interesting to know your background and to exchange our views on local business customs.
出だしに商習慣の話を出すのは適切か
It’s better to keep the greetings to a minimum at the beginning. And he can keep everything regarding local business customs altogether in the main part of the email.
商習慣の話が出だしと本論にまたがっているので、本論にまとめてスッキリさせたい。
3). Since I’m new to the Southeast Asian markets, it would be great if you could give me an essential reading list regarding local business customs (books, articles, papers, etc.).
「初めてなので」と謙遜する必要はあるか
There’s no need to be modest and it could be seen as not having confidence. It’s his first time in charge so he should show that he wants to learn more in order to make a good impression.

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