ラジオビジネス英語 2021/9/15 L69 出張先からの報告
Let’s learn how to write emails in English together.
Okay, let’s take a look at Takashi’s email.
-Points to Check 改善点
Subject: Presentation complete
The whole presentation, including the Q&A session, went well, and I think we were able to convey the message that we wanted to deliver.
I think it would be best to use common phrasing to keep it.
I had a chance to talk to a couple of agents briefly after the presentation. They told me that the property looked very attractive. They particularly liked the wooden features.
I think it would be better to summarize the talks with the vendors in a more concise way. This explanation is rather long so he should keep the focus on the feedback putting it in the beginning of the sentence.