ラジオビジネス英語 2021/9/15 L69 出張先からの報告





ラジオビジネス英語 2021/9/15 L69 出張先からの報告
Let’s learn how to write emails in English together.
Okay, let’s take a look at Takashi’s email.

-Points to Check 改善点
Subject: Presentation complete
プレゼンテーション終了
The whole presentation, including the Q&A session, went well, and I think we were able to convey the message that we wanted to deliver.
プレゼンは質疑応答を含めて全体がうまくいき、伝えたかったメッセージを伝えることができたと思います

I think it would be best to use common phrasing to keep it.

I had a chance to talk to a couple of agents briefly after the presentation. They told me that the property looked very attractive. They particularly liked the wooden features.
プレゼンテーションの後、何人かの業者と少しだけ話す機会がありました。彼らは、この物件がとても魅力的だと言ってくれました。特に木材を使っている点が気に入ったようです。

I think it would be better to summarize the talks with the vendors in a more concise way. This explanation is rather long so he should keep the focus on the feedback putting it in the beginning of the sentence.

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